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				<title>Frelisa Walker posted an update in the group Action – Adventure: Critique Partner Needed

I'm looking for a Beta Reader to [&#8230;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 10 May 2013 18:07:25 +0000</pubDate>

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						<p><a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/members/fw586/" title="Frelisa Walker" rel="nofollow">Frelisa Walker</a> posted an update in the group <a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/action-adventure/" rel="nofollow">Action – Adventure</a> Critique Partner Needed</p>
<p>I'm looking for a Beta Reader to check my novel chapters and short story submissions. I need someone who is especially great with English grammar and spelling. My instructor keeps pointing out the following problem areas: verb tense, possessive and plural words.</p>
<p>Frelisa<br />
<a href="mailto:thewriterfrelisawalker@ymail.com" rel="nofollow">thewriterfrelisawalker@ymail.com</a></p>

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				<title>tammy Lee joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Apr 2013 19:09:14 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Spooky joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 12 Nov 2012 23:04:40 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Mercenary Girl posted an update in the group Action – Adventure: Hi! I'm retooling my WIP--a police thriller with humorous [&#8230;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 31 Oct 2012 19:30:14 +0000</pubDate>

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						<p><a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/members/mercenarygirl/" title="Mercenary Girl" rel="nofollow">Mercenary Girl</a> posted an update in the group <a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/action-adventure/" rel="nofollow">Action – Adventure</a> Hi! I'm retooling my WIP--a police thriller with humorous and romantic elements. Am looking for crit partner. Am happy to swap first ch. and go from there.</p>

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				<title>Kristen Boe joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 31 Oct 2012 16:56:25 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Tom Munk joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Sep 2012 18:04:49 +0000</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Sep 2012 02:19:41 +0000</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2012 21:14:06 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Sidney posted an update in the group Action – Adventure: Hi, I am looking for a person who would be willing to [&#8230;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Aug 2012 13:23:11 +0000</pubDate>

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						<p><a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/members/sidney/" title="Sidney" rel="nofollow">Sidney</a> posted an update in the group <a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/action-adventure/" rel="nofollow">Action – Adventure</a> Hi, I am looking for a person who would be willing to exchange chapters on a quick timeline, such as a chapter every 2-3 days, with a quick turn-around of the critiques. My novel is finished and edited, I am re-editing, and I hope to get it done fast.<br />
I have lots of experience with critiquing, although I am not a pro. I can be as detailed as you like. I expect a sincere critique, no sugar coating, but I also believe in being supportive. A believe a critique should point at what needs to be changed without discouraging the writer. I believe that a good critique should address larger issues, such creating characters, and not only spelling and punctuation. Also, a good critique should reveal the strengths of the writer and help develop them. I can work very fast so I need a partner that can also send me pieces fast, such as somebody who has already written at least a first draft of a novel.</p>

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				<title>Catrina Barton joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jun 2012 03:28:17 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Jennifer Jelliff joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 18 Jun 2012 14:30:01 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Ahmad Taylor joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jun 2012 00:09:42 +0000</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 May 2012 15:59:04 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Amy Jarecki joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 21:33:30 +0000</pubDate>

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				<title>Madiha Rehman started the forum topic Icestation in the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Mar 2012 17:51:07 +0000</pubDate>

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						<p><a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/members/madiha/" title="Madiha Rehman" rel="nofollow">Madiha Rehman</a> started the forum topic <a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/action-adventure/forum/topic/icestation/" rel="nofollow">Icestation</a> in the group <a href="http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/action-adventure/" rel="nofollow">Action – Adventure</a>: Has anyone read the Icestation? Some call it a spoof. What's your opinion on it? </p>

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				<title>Mary Jean joined the group Action – Adventure</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 13 Mar 2012 03:28:46 +0000</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 14:10:05 +0000</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 22:00:15 +0000</pubDate>

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