Ladies Who Critique | Romance | Group Activity http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/romance/activity/feed Romance - Group Activity Feed Wed, 19 Jun 2013 02:17:13 +0000 http://buddypress.org/?v=1.5.6 http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/romance/forum/topic/looking-for-a-cp-for-a-contemporary-romance-newbie/ Heather Segerstrom started the forum topic Looking for a CP for a Contemporary Romance-Newbie in the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/groups/romance/forum/topic/looking-for-a-cp-for-a-contemporary-romance-newbie/ Sun, 16 Jun 2013 04:44:17 +0000 Heather Segerstrom started the forum topic Looking for a CP for a Contemporary Romance-Newbie in the group Romance Hi! A relative newbie here, I am looking for some feedback on my first attempt at penning a story. I very much would one day like to publish but am just getting started on my journey. I love to read and would […]

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15549/ Heather Segerstrom joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15549/ Sun, 16 Jun 2013 04:21:06 +0000 Heather Segerstrom joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15547/ Sarah Dussome joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15547/ Sun, 16 Jun 2013 02:04:23 +0000 Sarah Dussome joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15534/ Jasmine Sheffield posted an update in the group Romance: Hello, I have completed my novella (66K words), Freshmen […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15534/ Fri, 14 Jun 2013 17:47:17 +0000 Jasmine Sheffield posted an update in the group Romance Hello,

I have completed my novella (66K words), Freshmen FIfteen. I am looking for a critique partner. This book does have adult scenes but is not erotic by definition. I have posted the same request in the erotic forum.

Book blurb -
Best friends since their freshmen year of high school, Laila and Tanya, are finally graduating and preparing to leave their hometown to attend the college of their choice, an HBCU. Before the summer ends, their fate will be changed.

The decision to lose your virginity, when, and to who can alter your life forever... as Laila and Tanya soon learn in Freshmen Fifteen.

I'm also available to critique in exchange.

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15533/ Jasmine Sheffield joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15533/ Fri, 14 Jun 2013 17:45:22 +0000 Jasmine Sheffield joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15506/ Jackie J joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15506/ Thu, 13 Jun 2013 04:40:59 +0000 Jackie J joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15487/ chr15ty joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15487/ Mon, 10 Jun 2013 18:22:58 +0000 chr15ty joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15484/ Paulette posted an update in the group Romance: Looking for someone who can point out where I could improve. […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15484/ Mon, 10 Jun 2013 06:07:59 +0000 Paulette posted an update in the group Romance Looking for someone who can point out where I could improve. I would like to join a group or just find a CP. I like honesty, brutal honesty. I would rather be told my works lacks here than somewhere else. Bouncing ideas off each other about our work is inspirational for me.

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15442/ Julz Arimah joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15442/ Thu, 06 Jun 2013 10:36:54 +0000 Julz Arimah joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15438/ Mari Manning posted an update in the group Romance: Last December I finished a romantic suspense -- 89,000 words […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15438/ Wed, 05 Jun 2013 16:30:27 +0000 Mari Manning posted an update in the group Romance Last December I finished a romantic suspense -- 89,000 words -- which I have not been able to sell. I have two published romances, and two others besides this one that are not. Also, I am an experienced critique-er. I am looking for someone who has done critiques before who will beta-read my romantic suspense in return for me reading theirs. Be as harsh as you like. Also I would prefer the critique in Word with track changes if possible. Contact me at manningillinois@gmail.com.

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15437/ Mari Manning joined the group Romance http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15437/ Wed, 05 Jun 2013 16:25:50 +0000 Mari Manning joined the group Romance

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15436/ Cornelia Amiri posted an update in the group Romance: I am the author of 18 published books. My name is Cornelia […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15436/ Wed, 05 Jun 2013 14:39:11 +0000 Cornelia Amiri posted an update in the group Romance I am the author of 18 published books. My name is Cornelia Amiri, I also write under the name Maeve Alpin, I need a critique partner for two Steamunk romances with a Victorian to ancient Egyptian time travelling theme and a main stream to vanilla erotica heat level. I also have two Celtic/paranormal/romance novels I need critiques on. I am also interested in a beta reader for them as well. Please message me or email me at CelticRomanceQueen@gmail.com

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15428/ Mary Frances Gualandri posted an update in the group Romance: Hello, everyone. My name is Mary Frances Gualandri, and […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15428/ Tue, 04 Jun 2013 22:51:32 +0000 Mary Frances Gualandri posted an update in the group Romance Hello, everyone. My name is Mary Frances Gualandri, and I'm looking for a critique partner for my new contemporary romance, Private Dancer. The heat level is medium to high. Message me or comment here if you are interested.

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15367/ James Saddler posted an update in the group Romance: Betta reader, critique partner needed asap!! I have wrote a […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15367/ Sun, 02 Jun 2013 16:47:16 +0000 James Saddler posted an update in the group Romance Betta reader, critique partner needed asap!!

I have wrote a book called THE TRUEST STORY EVER TOLD: THE COSMIC PLAY, and before I press the book I would like to find a supreme beta reader. If you are or know any supreme beta readers please let me know, thank you…

Who are you? Is God, Satan, hell, heaven, death, twin flames, soul mates, psychic powers, aliens and much more real? Are we in heaven, hell, dimension school, prison, purgatory, or is this all the same, but worded differently?.. I would like a beta reader to read and be apart of this soon world best seller. Will you be able to say I was the beta reader for that book o my god…..

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15362/ Susan Ayers posted an update in the group Romance: Hi there, so I've posted in the Fantasy board too. I have a […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15362/ Sun, 02 Jun 2013 14:44:01 +0000 Susan Ayers posted an update in the group Romance Hi there, so I've posted in the Fantasy board too. I have a new book Series I'd like to get out there next it’s called ELEMENTS-The Before World…the first book is ’Sara’s Awakening’. I have a cover the book is written. I need cleaning, editing, flow…all that. It is 75k words apx. Also if someone could help me label it besides just fantasy. There is a mere single sex scene, not explicit and its near the end of the book. It is a PG-13 level in the sex dept. Also the fantasy is surrounding oracles, tattoos, magic and the love story part. I've been told it's a great and original idea, I need a cleaning/crit.

My book blurb, and yes it needs work, its too long: A particular set of catastrophic storms devastated all electronic dependencies that people had relied upon for so long in the 22nd century. Many moved to seek refuge from Royal Family that took over for the government years ago. Little did they know they would be fighting for space and their lives within the forest on the outer limits of the castle.

Sara’s mother never told her of her own powers and the truth of her family heritage. This shy yet hardheaded girl of nineteen meets a man and soon finds out is not who he appears to be. She is forced into this new life and struggles to find out why she is so important. A girl who for the past three years had survived with her sisters and elderly father in the woods, she must now learn more about herself then she ever thought was possible. She is thrown into this new world and is forced to figure out what is true, what is real and if magic really exists, again. All the while, she wants to know what her role is in this twisting and turning love tale. Could her first love really be her true love?

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15359/ Mariah R. Nobles posted an update in the group Romance: "If she whispered ‘take me’ he would. He would bend her […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15359/ Sun, 02 Jun 2013 02:55:49 +0000 Mariah R. Nobles posted an update in the group Romance "If she whispered ‘take me’ he would. He would bend her over the sink and he would fuck her until she couldn't move. If just seeing him naked could excite her so what would happen if he touched her? She lived through the fires of hell but something told her she wouldn't live through his fire. He’d burn her up, eat her alive, and still want more."

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]]> http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15308/ RJ posted an update in the group Romance: Hi everyone, I'm working on a contemporary romance, in the […] http://www.ladieswhocritique.com/activity/p/15308/ Thu, 30 May 2013 16:18:09 +0000 RJ posted an update in the group Romance Hi everyone,
I'm working on a contemporary romance, in the mid-heat rage. I'm in the editing stage of this WIP of 80+ words. I'm willing to read anything you've got and critique. Email me at rosalee.jesudas@yahoo.com

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