Pepper Wynne

Looking to Critique

…an erotic science fiction novel. The erotic part is very explicit and is central to the story and it’s development. I have dropped my threesome into a world where they must make a choice between the Empire they serve or the alien race they have discovered. I am not a natural plotter of stories, for the most part I write a scene first so I can get to know the characters and plot around that. Last work count was 33k and I think I’ve got the end of it done. I have begun to think it might work as a set of stories. 3 books even.

Nope, I am a newbie

Yes, I’m serious about getting published

Encouragement & support as as I am new to critiquing

Casual exchange, no deadlines

Monthly

An idea hamster who has never gotten to the last hurdle of actually publishing something

T. Huff, L.M. Bujold, P. Briggs. A. Norton, S.Lee and S. Miller, A. McCaffery, R. McKinley……

We can go with the 5 current half read ones; Cyroburn by L.M. Bujold, Physik by A. Sage, In Service by Mima, A History of the World in 100 Objects by N. MacGregor and Real Sex for Real Women by L. Berman. (I enjoy my research projects)

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I am late bloomer and perpetual starter of things. I am best described as an idea hamster, I am never short of ideas, only time. As a writer I do not consider myself to be very good at the mechanics of the English language; spelling and punctuation are not my strong points. As a critique partner I would be most useful as someone who looks at character building or even world building. Ideas are what I do best. I have always been interested in Science Fiction and Fantasy because Science Fiction lets the author use their limitless imagination to tell whatever story they wish. I only discovered the erotica genre recently but I like it. I have always enjoyed reading about men and women and relationships. Erotica just takes the covers off the bed and lets you get right in there with characters. Since I am a disciple of the write-what-you-know principle I would not be able to offer much in the way of critiquing a BDSM piece, I don’t mind reading it, I just wouldn’t be able to offer much towards authenticity. I have never gotten anything I’ve written to the published point so I haven’t much advice to offer in that arena either. But I do love a good story and am willing to exchange work if you are interested.

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