Still looking for someone to look over Zeros? I an not a stranger to critiquing, in fact I love looking over others work. I find we have so much to learn from each other. I am also currently working on a mature YA urban fantasy with a twist of mystery right now. The story is based in reality and hopefully it reads as mysterious and suspenseful as I imagine it. Send me an email if you are interest. And I’m in the north, and yes it is getting cold.