I’ve done the same thing with my WIP…probably have w15 different story beginnings and so far nothing has clicked! I have never critiqued someone’s writing (other than my college students’ essays) but I would love the opportunity to swap critics and ideas with. I am working on a book to submit to the Love Inspired series (Christian based romance novels) although I love all genres. If you would be interested in swapping ideas with me, let me know please. My email is firstname.lastname@example.org.