Re: Critique Partners

#4923

allyson
Participant

Hello,
I am looking for a critique partner.
My WIP is about an angel who unexpectaditly takes the crown fron her parents in order to help one of her very close friends. But everything goes wrong and she ends up on earth, with her soon to be abusive ex husband who is hell bent on killing her and her family to take over her city with his human partner in crime. But Camael will do ANYTHING to save her city.
This book is filled with betrayl, black mail, murder, sword fighting, love, and some good ass kicking.
Let me know if your interested. In return I can give very good feedback on pace, character, and anything else you might need.