I’m ready to have a critique partner. An agent is looking at my first chapter, my critique group has looked at the first two chapters, and Book Country has looked at the first five chapters. I’ll be revising whenever the agent gets back to me, but I know my critique group won’t have time to look at the entire manuscript in the near future.
My pitch: When the archangel Gabriel changes his game plan and seeks to use the demon Liam’s angelic lover against him, the two must keep secret their connection while serving the roles of heaven and hell.
It’s 80,000 words and is ready for someone to look at the entire manuscript for critiques.