I like it! You’ve certainly come further with this scene.
“I know this may be in part because I am the first woman to lead in the history of Helix,”
feels a little bit heavy handed to me–however if the story is about inequality or if it’s very relevant then I would keep it.
That’s my two cents. Yes, you have some misspellings but I’ve noticed it getting better due to practice! Keep writing! I want to see more of the story.