Re: First Page

#4543

Dawn
Participant

This was the original draft before I decided to go journal, so that’s okay that you didn’t critique it like one lol.

I’m trying to decide where the perfect start would be. The next document I suppose will be titled “The Agency_Drake_Take3” lol. His is the hardest one, because everything happens in his story, whereas the others all start somewhere in it. My “outline” is in the forum with what we’re working on, so maybe you guys can give me some help. I feel like a five year old in with a bunch of adults. You all are so much better than me -_-,

I might start him off running from the three immortal brothers. It ties him in with several characters right off the bat; Gwedian, Malachi, and the three (as of yet unnamed) brothers. Hmm… *pulls up a word document* … XD