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Re: First Sentences

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kaylinn57
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I’d like to give this a try, since I’ve struggled with my first sentence quite a bit. It’s changed a few times, but here’s the latest version.

The ring was warmer than usual that day, and had I not been dealing with my mother’s almost-complete meltdown, I probably would have paid more attention.

There have been replies to all the other first sentences, so I’m not sure i could add anything at this point. 🙂