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Re: First Sentences

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downeynl
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@jessicafriday wow I was all over the place in that comment about your first sentence (commas all in the wrong places, anyone?) haha, sorry about that! I’m glad that you were still able to understand what I meant about the adverbs though!

I agree with what you said about the last word of my first sentence. I’ll have to think of a way to make it flow better. Thanks for your comment! =)