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Re: First Sentences

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Theresa
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Thanks everyone for your feedback. I’m rewriting it right now 🙂 You pretty much confirmed what I already knew. Be back later to read and critique a few more.

@tracy Rohlfing I like your idea of reposting after we revise. It would be interesting to see the before and after.