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Re: First Sentences

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Dawn
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Thanks, Tracy! I love what you did to my sentence! The whole “paragraph” is this:

“The wolves’ howls pierced the air, giving an eerie echo to the farms of Valentine Nebraska. They seem to be begging for someone, anyone, to listen to their tales. They seem to be calling for you.”

Also, what I’ve done with this book is put this paragraph and others like it before the new chapters (like some put poems before their chapters or whatever). It doesn’t seem like it has much to do with the book, but I think it gives the reader a hint of what is to come.