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Re: First Sentences

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Tracy Rohlfing
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@Dawn
I like it! But I wouldn’t use “Seem” too much. I am such a guilty “seem” user myself.

example:

“The wolves howls pierced the air, giving an eerie echo to the farms of Valentine Nebraska. Their voices begged for someone, anyone, to listen to their tales. They are calling for you.”

That’s interesting about putting them before chapters. I’ve read a couple books like that. 🙂