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Re: First Sentences

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nefaerious
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I’ve redone my first chapter three times, each has a different first sentence.:/ I also have a prologue- I’ll give you one from each.

From the prologue:
An umbral figure slid forth from the wall of obsidian; it was as if the glistening rock jutting up behind it had given birth to a sentient shadow.

First sentence (most recent):
Elianna knelt down to tie her shoe with shaking hands.