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Re: First Sentences

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laura
Keymaster

What a great thread. Opening lines are SOOOOOO important and yet for me, it’s the hardest thing to get right. I can’t tell you how many times I have re-written it. Currently:

“He seemed to be everywhere that I went.”

I know, still needs some work 😉