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Re: First Sentences

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Anonymous

@jessicafriday Okay, not of but in. Thanks! (Geez, English´s so hard sometimes :D)

@Jani I like the action in your first sentence, promises an interesting story. But I think it doesn´t sound natural. Maybe it too long, I´d write it like this “I only realized what was happening, when I suddenly felt the cold steel of a knife in my side.” Something like this 😉