Re: Flashbacks: What’s your take?

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sinsoftheflesh
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That’s not a bad idea. I thought I would use it to close the 2nd chapter because chapter three she attempts to kill her uncle who killed her father. after her fathers death her mother killed her self, so she blames him for both. seance I wrote it I have bin stuck. It wouldn’t be bad to save it and see if it fits better elsewhere. Thank you for your advice.