Oh, I don’t mind a long story, lol.
Also, I forgot to mention I’m going away on vacation next weekend, and I won’t get back until August 1. I’d be happy to start critiquing your work before I leave, but it may be a little while before I can get back to you. I hope that’s okay with you.
If you want to start by swapping our first chapters, my email is firstname.lastname@example.org