Hi everyone, I’m from Foley Al on the gulf coast. I would love to find a few ladies who would take me under their wings and give me their honest critique. I’ve completed sixteen chapters and 43,848 words. I’m in the middle of rewriting some of these chapters and I’m continuing on with the story at the same time, I’m only a third of the way in to the story. I am so excited to meet you all and look forward to reading some of your works I hope I can be of some help.