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spinderella
Participant

Hi Nicole,

Are you still looking? I have never critiqued anyone else’s work before, but I’ve done major revisions and re-hauls on my own. 🙂 And I’m into dark, bloody stuff!

I’m looking for a CP to trade with. Mine is a 74K historical thriller. Here’s the summary:

“It’s 1919, and within the tented city of the Marvelle Circus, star aerialist, Laila Vilonia, has just survived a brutal attack delivered by men hired by the rival Benelli Brothers show.

Seventeen-year-old Laila thinks that if her attackers are dead, she can forget what happened to her. So she persuades the sideshow’s notorious headlining act (twin brothers, “The Disappearing Man”) to help her kill them.

In exchange for the twins’ help, Laila aids in the massacre of the Benelli Brothers Circus. And not just for the twins’ sake—Marvelle will soon be sold to Benelli. Laila must play the twins’ twisted game in order to keep her home from falling into the filthy, bloodstained hands of her enemies.

From the greatest show on earth to the cozy little inn where they board for the winter, through sawdust, spotlights, and sweetshops, Laila manipulates her close friends into helping prevent the sale—an endeavor she hasn’t been entirely honest about.”

Let me know whether or not you’d be interested in trading the first couple chapters!

-Chloe