I’m wondering if you meant to address your message to Jade instead of myself. If my manuscript was accessible, I would snatch up your CP offer immediately. I write and enjoy reading character driven stories also and am wanting truthful (‘tough’) but constructive critiques. My plot… I guess its on the lazy side for lack of a better description but I have a purpose for that and I’m hoping the reader will ‘see’ and understand that as well as fall in like with the main character as the story progresses.
But anyway, I think you meant your CP offer for Jade but I’d like to keep you in mind for a CP when my writing computer is up and running.