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jerechase
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Anyone feel like reading a short contemporary about a wheelchair-bound artist and a soldier returning from the Gulf? Emotional but not, I hope, too dark, sweet to medium as far as explicitness. I’m looking for a reality check on the big picture–pacing, characterization, does it work for you?–more than grammar or spelling. Am happy to reciprocate; maybe we could trade a chapter apiece and see how we mesh, then go from there.