Thanks ladies. I’m kind of freaking out about this. When I first started using this query, I got two full requests in a matter of a week. And then nothing. All form rejections. I wasn’t sure if the query needed work, or I was sending it to the wrong agents. I figure I need to look for agents who rep YA and horror I guess.
So the premise doesn’t seem too simple? There’s a ton more going on in the story, but I’ve read many times from agent blogs that you only make your query about your first 50 or so pages.