@shakespeare, both your stories seem to be right up my ally. I would be more than happy to read and critique, I have worked with foster care children in my previous life, so my knowledge on that is extensive. I’m new to critiquing but I will do my best .
I’m looking for feedback on my WIP. It’s about a 16 year old girl who sees the Devil, she discovers that she has the power to change people’s destinies, which is why the Devil has taken an interest in her.