Re: Pacing

#5122

Chiaki
Participant

Maybe you should take out some scenes instead of adding new ones. And be sure to give your characters a break once in a while ^_^ But to make sure your story doesn’t fall flat, keep the tension in the “break” scenes. Discretly remind readers of a pending threat. For example, instead of just having your characters sit down and drink coffee, maybe make one of them glance over her shoulder every so often to make sure she’s not being followed or overheard or something 😛