Hmm. Maybe that’s what it is Chiaki. I need to figure out what to put in break scenes. I definitely think that’s an issue for me.
I have a great crit partner whose writing is a lot better than mine. She’s really helped me grow and has some serious freaking patience. (lol) But she’s really busy and I hate to ask her for too much help so I came here instead. 🙂
*strangles the break scene*