@abigailboone I too love the military thing too… this sounds like it would almost fit right in with what i’m working on. I agree with Miranda… i too thought that one of them, maybe the narrator was a female. Not sure why after going back to read it, but it came across that way. Don’t know what you’re going for in the plot but it wold be really cool if the Sarge was a woman. She could be one badass chick! Anyway, would love to see more.