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#4669

abigalboone
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This is good and tight and snappy. The dialogue is clean and sharp. Needed a comma here and there, but for the most part, this was nice and tight and I liked the characters. The girl is dark but we know better, the guy is sweet, with so much potential. Makes me want to read it, so good job.