@miranda reese Damn Miranda, you make me want to change my entire plot to fit that idea! How cool that would be! And you said, gal, which one seems like a gal? LOL. I hate when I have sex confusion. How about I just post the next snippet and let you see because I could sure use a fresh eye on my opening. Tell me what you’re getting and understanding, I won’t tell you and spoil the ability for you to see if the writing is showing what I need it to.