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Dawn
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I am sooo glad that I got good notes on that scene. It’s probably my favorite and best written in the whole book lol. As for the list, is there anyway to portray the same feel without it?

I see what you mean by turning around twice. I need to edit that. Basically, she’s shocked by the voice and then shocked again when she turns to see the hot guy looking at her.