Laura,
Thanks I’d love the help. I’ve had two crit partners read my steamy scene. Both agreed that more emotion needs to take place. My email is rj256@aol.com. If you want we can start exchanging chapters.
Jackie
Laura,
Thanks I’d love the help. I’ve had two crit partners read my steamy scene. Both agreed that more emotion needs to take place. My email is rj256@aol.com. If you want we can start exchanging chapters.
Jackie
