Not sure if you are still looking for a crit partner, but I’m interested. I had to laugh at your “Romeo and Juliet with vampires” because I posted a description of my new paranormal romance/urban fantasy as Romeo and Juliet meets Legion. I am a very fast reader and plow through several books a week. As far as critique skills, I’m expert in spelling and punctuation, but really feel the character development and pacing are more important for the first draft. I can give very specific feedback as to what works and doesn’t, and why. I’d love to take a look, and would love to have you read some of my recently completed ms in return.