I’m planning to self publish and have reached the Beta Reader stage for my Adult Science Fantasy story (58,000 words long).
Feedback is needed mostly on plot, pacing, characters and, since its the first of four novels, the ending.
Koral was born a product of genetic manipulation and knew little of the world beyond the steel walls of home. Until, on one unhappy night, he flees into the desert. But the sands he must brave are full of more than mere monsters.
This is a world ruled by instinct, where innocence is drowned in blood. Here, men are sacrificed to the great Serpent God Lorric only to emerge as the most feared killers on the planet.
With the god’s sights set on turning him into a legend, Koral must sacrifice himself to survive and become … The Rogue King.