Hi! I’m writing a high fantasy novel for all ages (the point of view characters are 16-50 years old). What I need help with is plot holes and opinions on characters and events.
Here is my “blurb”. I hope you’re interested! 🙂
The world is shaking, crying, burning. Death will come to those who don’t prepare to fight.
Before her birth, the king ordered every Aruel to be captured and killed. Every time Emery thinks she is safe, she has to escape again. But then she meets Ayess, a little girl who sees straight through her, and everything changes. Ayess is not made for escaping. If Emery wants to run, she has to leave her behind.
Her decision gets a whole new meaning when a group of her own kind gather their forces against the king. If she stays, she will be crushed, but if she runs, she’ll be a traitor.
Emery has to figure out whether or not her worst fate is death, before the earth takes its last labored breath.