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    logans
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    I am looking for a critique partner to swap novels with. My novel, Unlovable, is about a teen who suffers from unfavorable comparisons to her cousin. Sometimes she is more comfortable with the ghosts that she sees than with her family. I mostly need a pair of fresh eyes and honest reactions to the characters and story. Does it drag anywhere? Were the characters believable? If you have a novel that you would like input on, maybe we could swap and help each other out.

    #6972

    mandylee
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    If you’re interested in swapping, my novel also has some ghosts in it, but is really a Supernatural/Fantasy mashup and includes the Fey. Tear (meant in both senses) is about eighteen-year-old Jo, whose life has always been abnormal, but a threat on her sister drags her into a world she’s long avoided. It’s about 78K, and I’m looking for the same; are the characters believable? Are there parts that make sense? I’m very willing to start out swapping chapters to see if we’re a good fit. Thanks!

    #6980

    logans
    Participant

    Sure, I would like to swap…that would be great! I would’ve checked here earlier for responses, but I thought they came by e-mail.

    #6984

    ayasha
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    hi, i am almost finish with my first novel, a YA/scifi. 70k words are written of total 80k planned. i am ready to swap a chapter with you and see if we can work together. i am good with plot, characters, and world building—having read thousands of sci-fis 🙂 i mainly need help with language. please PM me if you are interested.

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