I am looking for a critique partner to swap novels with. My novel, Unlovable, is about a teen who suffers from unfavorable comparisons to her cousin. Sometimes she is more comfortable with the ghosts that she sees than with her family. I mostly need a pair of fresh eyes and honest reactions to the characters and story. Does it drag anywhere? Were the characters believable? If you have a novel that you would like input on, maybe we could swap and help each other out.
If you’re interested in swapping, my novel also has some ghosts in it, but is really a Supernatural/Fantasy mashup and includes the Fey. Tear (meant in both senses) is about eighteen-year-old Jo, whose life has always been abnormal, but a threat on her sister drags her into a world she’s long avoided. It’s about 78K, and I’m looking for the same; are the characters believable? Are there parts that make sense? I’m very willing to start out swapping chapters to see if we’re a good fit. Thanks!
hi, i am almost finish with my first novel, a YA/scifi. 70k words are written of total 80k planned. i am ready to swap a chapter with you and see if we can work together. i am good with plot, characters, and world building—having read thousands of sci-fis 🙂 i mainly need help with language. please PM me if you are interested.