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Could use a fresh pair of eyes to BETA my YA urban fantasy.

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  • #3330

    smileylou
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    Hi ladies,

    I’m in need of someone to read through the first three chaps of my novel. It’s a YA urban fantasy about a girl who discovers a dying Angel (you should know I’ve re-named the species ‘Védő’ because I hear agents are sick of stories about Angels). Following this discovery my MC, Mona, is sent on a mission to destroy a knife that’s threatening to wipe out a hidden race of immortals.

    I’m trying to nail ‘voice’ and could use some feedback from a fresh pair of eyes. Feel free to throw anything you’d like me to read in my direction. I’ll try my very best to help if I can.

    🙂 xx

    *Note* Védő in Hungarian means protector.

    #5719

    jayme
    Participant

    I’d be happy to swap the first three chapters with you! I’m struggling with world-building clarity and the more opinions I get, the better. My e-mail is jnabbott11@hotmail.com.

    -Jayme

    #5722

    smileylou
    Participant

    Hi Jayme,

    A swap would be great, thanks! Would you rather I send it pasted in to the email or as an attachment?

    xx

    #5723

    jayme
    Participant

    Word doc. is fine by me. Which would you prefer when I send you mine?

    I look forward to reading your work!
    –Jayme

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