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  • #6550

    mmisra
    Participant

    Hi! I’m currently trying to decide between two versions of a first chapter for my novel. I’d love all the feedback I can get. In return, I’ll read a couple chapters that are worrying you, short stories, or really anything that’s <5000 words.

    Short version of my novel: high fantasy, and the villain is the main character (though he doesn’t start out that way). These first chapters are about 2000 words each.

    As a critique partner, I’m completely honest but very diplomatic with my feedback. 🙂

    PM me or reply here if you’re interested!

    -Maya

    #6551

    Anonymous

    Hi Maya,

    Since I’ve read the whole story, I could help pick a first chapter.

    You don’t have to do anything in return since you’ve already looked at all my stuff.

    Unice

    #6559

    bandi
    Participant

    I am looking feedback/CP for my own fantasy/YA novel, so I am willing to give your chapter versions a try. I will send you a particularly bothersome chapter and I will be very happy if you pick as many holes in it as necessary, or even tear it apart! Let me know if you are interested.

    #6561

    mmisra
    Participant

    I sent you a PM. 🙂

    As of now, I’ve decided on a chapter version. But, since that version could still probably use critiques, I’m still happy to swap with anyone.

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