Hi! I’m currently trying to decide between two versions of a first chapter for my novel. I’d love all the feedback I can get. In return, I’ll read a couple chapters that are worrying you, short stories, or really anything that’s <5000 words.
Short version of my novel: high fantasy, and the villain is the main character (though he doesn’t start out that way). These first chapters are about 2000 words each.
As a critique partner, I’m completely honest but very diplomatic with my feedback. 🙂