I am searching for a critique partner or Beta reader for my first novel, Behold: The Night Guardians. This is my first attempt at writing a novel and I have about 17,000 or so words, roughly five chapters of readable material. I am in need of someone who is willing to go chapter by chapter critiquing.
I don’t have a real synopsis yet, my last one sucks. The story itself is about a brother and sister in Chicago who hunt demons with the help of their friends and their own special abilities (Johnny can see demons and through walls/Amanda can hear demons over large distances as well as thoughts).
It is also in first person/multiple POV.