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    tjcarroll
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    Hello All – I need a few CPs or Betas for my YA Fantasy (complete at 95,000 words). The plot centers around Meron Almasi, an 18-year-old outcast who is forced to journey across her desert-world and confront the mythical beings who live there.

    I’m looking for honest, big picture critiques and I’d like a quick turnaround (next two weeks, preferably) but I have an open schedule during that time so I can read yours just as quickly!

    #6243

    hessaissa
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    Hi,

    I love fantasy and the plot to your MS sounds exciting! Are you still looking for a CP? My own MS is a YA high fantasy complete at (73K words). Here’s the basic plot if you’re interested:

    Serving a ten-year sentence for stealing a dragon, eighteen-year-old Valina Vallomir is unexpectedly released from the Sky Prisons hovering over the city on one condition – she joins the Forbidden Tournament where is forced to fight for her freedom alongside the city’s twenty-two most wanted criminals – including the dragon-rider who arrested her in the first place, Captain Erikin Glaucon.

    If you’re interested in exchanging a few chapters to see if we could work as CPs, you can email me on issahessa@gmail.com

    🙂

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