My story centers on 2 brothers who walk from Quebec to Dawson Yukon to seek gold, their time in the goldfields, and their train ride back home. I’ve had 2 years of Master Class Fiction Writing by Rich Marcello, a published author. My 1st draft is now 77K words, and needs to be cut down and holes filled in. My 1st draft is heavy on researched “daily life”.
Would love to crit someone’s 1st draft of similar length, with writer of similar level.
I have this free life because I am retired and want to crit 2X/week at 20-25 pages each session, so seek someone of similar circumstances.