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    elferguson
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    Hello everyone!

    I’m looking for a/some critique parter(s) for my young adult novel, BALLOONING. I’d be very willing to make a trade if you have a manuscript in need of critiquing as well.

    At 50, 000 words, BALLOONING is a fairly quick read. I’d describe it as a quirky adventure story with elements of magic. Below is a brief summary.

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    Fifteen-year-old Chester Phillips is building a hot air balloon, and he has every intention of flying it around the world. Unfortunately, no one really believes that Chester’s creation will get off the ground, because Chester is building it out of garbage.

    Finding “just the right part” in alleyways, dumpsters, and landfills is Chester’s greatest satisfaction. Although he isn’t above sacrificing cleanliness and dignity for the parts he needs, Chester maintains one rule: he only takes things no one else wants.

    Chester accidentally breaks his own rule, however, when he brings home a battered scuba tank. Inside, is a beautiful, if somewhat cold and reclusive, genie.

    And EVERYONE wants a genie.

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    Let me know if you’d be interested in reading or making a trade. Thank you in advance!

    #5701

    Anonymous

    Your manuscript sounds fascinating!! I’d def be interested in Swapping. If you have a chance, check out the VERY under-detailed synopsis of my novel and let me know if you’re interested.

    Callie

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