I am writing a novel where the characters are thrown into another realm at a turning point in their lives. There, they are swept over by a conflict for power and residents using a prohibited practice. It focuses on how past struggles can shape what you become unfavorably if you let your demons win and how this fight is not strictly black or white, sometimes you either succumb to them or you learn to coexist.
Hello. I would love to critique this. The moral sounds very interesting to me as a teen (you know, with the world being black and white, and all). What would the terms be for me? How frequent the feedback? I haven’t compiled and finished my own novel right now, but I’m wondering if that matters, as you seem only to be looking for another opinion on your own novel.