Hello! I’m writing a fantasy novel with plenty of romance in it, and while I’ve already gotten feedback on the fantasy aspect of the book, I need someone to tell me if the romance is realistic.
Leithen, a smith’s apprentice, falls in love with Itaýe, the princess, and they are violently separated because the king (Itaýe’s uncle) wants her to marry the commander of the royal army. Leithen is thrown into the dungeons and Itaýe is forced to decide which dress to wear to her wedding in only a few weeks. How will they get back together?