…and I would like a critique partner/beta reader or two to help me polish it up.
It is science fiction, like I said, and the plot centers around two people, a human girl and a mechanical boy. Without giving too much of the plot away, the two of them embark on a train trip that both opens both their “eyes” and almost kills them.
If anyone’s interested, I can send more information. 🙂
Also, I forgot to mention I’m going away on vacation next weekend, and I won’t get back until August 1. I’d be happy to start critiquing your work before I leave, but it may be a little while before I can get back to you. I hope that’s okay with you.