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  • #3406

    hiroko
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    …and I would like a critique partner/beta reader or two to help me polish it up.

    It is science fiction, like I said, and the plot centers around two people, a human girl and a mechanical boy. Without giving too much of the plot away, the two of them embark on a train trip that both opens both their “eyes” and almost kills them.

    If anyone’s interested, I can send more information. 🙂

    #5848

    takayta
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    Hi Hiroko,

    Ooh, I’m definitely interested, although I’m writing a YA fantasy novel (there’s more on my profile if you’re interested). It’s finished, but I’m still working on editing the first draft.

    For now, I just want someone to look over my first couple of chapters and tell me what they think of the story (what did they like/dislike, what and how to improve, characters, plot, etc.).

    Anyway, let me know if you’re interested in swapping works. 🙂

    Maria

    #5849

    hiroko
    Participant

    I wouldn’t mind doing that at all! Though I should warn you: my manuscript’s nowhere near that short.

    #5850

    takayta
    Participant

    Oh, I don’t mind a long story, lol.

    Also, I forgot to mention I’m going away on vacation next weekend, and I won’t get back until August 1. I’d be happy to start critiquing your work before I leave, but it may be a little while before I can get back to you. I hope that’s okay with you.

    If you want to start by swapping our first chapters, my email is gardner.maria@hotmail.com

    Maria

    #5851

    hiroko
    Participant

    That’s fine; I don’t mind. I will send over the first chapter (and one/two other pages that act as a prologue) today, I think. Once more, thank you for agreeing to help with this. 🙂

    Hiroko

    #5852

    takayta
    Participant

    And thank you for agreeing to help me out with my writing. 🙂 Just sent you an email.

    Maria

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