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Is my scene too melodramatic/cheesy?

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    risu
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    Hi everyone! I suck at writing emotion and creating that emotional connection with the reader. As I seek to improve this quality of my writing, I fear I might have gone too far. I’m worried that I’ve stepped into melodrama or just plain cheesy. So, I am looking for opinions on my scene. It’s 3K words, the prologue to book 2 in an epic fantasy series, and told in third person POV. Anyone out there willing to take a read and tell me if it works or not?

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    racheludin
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    I’ll take a shot at it. If you’re interested after reading my profile, PM me.

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