I am currently writing a novel which is over 10,000 words and 32 pages long. It is a story of two college freshmen (Jason and Marisa) who meet in biology class. Jason instantly feels connected to Marisa and wants to develop a relationship with her. But, Marisa has a boyfriend (who isn’t faithful to her and she knows it, but chooses to ignore it) named Peter.
I am currently developing the relationship with Jason and Marisa and have a long ways to go. I would love for someone to critique it for me, give style and grammar suggestions, and give suggestions on what I can do to improve the story.
Thanks everyone! I look forward to hearing from all of you!