I’ve finished the first revision for a fantasy and would like to get some feedback. My MS is 70,000 words, so while it has a made-up, medieval-like setting, it isn’t “epic fantasy” length.
My one-line hook: A princess forgets the past six months because a fever, then discovers that she’d had her memory of a boy she loved taken from her so she would marry the king of the country hers has been warring for the past twenty years.
I’m pretty open to any genre to critique in return.
I am working on the second draft of my mystery novel and would love a CP partner. I enjoy fantasy books and would be happy to critique with you. My novel is also a little over 70,000 words. If you’re interested let me know. You can e-mail me at email@example.com I look forward to hearing from you. I can also exchange work on a weekly basis.