I have a finished novel only in the sense that it has a beginning, middle and ending. I need someone to help me with an honest critique and to be sure the flow is good. I am trying to bulk it up since it is only at 62,000 words. However, I am not sure the sub plot fits well throughout the story. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated. I am willing to critique for you, too and can exchange a chapter or more a week. Thanks.